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01 December 2006 @ 09:04 am

As we settle in for a good storm, I thought I'd do my part and supply a new chatper for you all.  Clickity, click, click!

 
 
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Current Mood: accomplishedaccomplished
Current Music: Stereophonics - Help Me She's Out of Her Mind
 
 
16 November 2006 @ 10:24 am
The uneditted version (including racy bits) of What No One Knew Chapter 6 is now available.  ENJOY!
 
 
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01 November 2006 @ 10:19 am
The newest Chapter of my Labyrinth fanfiction is now available at ff.net.  Follow the linkage.
 
 
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Current Music: Butch Walker - Alicia Amnesia
 
 
26 October 2006 @ 12:59 pm

Chapter 5 of What No One Knew is now available at my website and includes NIN song lyrics that I could not post at ff.net.

 
 
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29 September 2006 @ 08:19 am
Announced this in my LJ, but just in case some of you don't get that.

Chapter 5 of WNOK is up at ff.net  Link to the hook up.
 
 
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Current Music: Sweet Home Alabama
 
 
 
13 September 2006 @ 01:09 pm
Chapter 2 (chapter 3 in ff.net because of the prologue) is now posted. I almost forgot about this story!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3085655/3/
 
 
18 August 2006 @ 08:04 am
The uneditted version of this chapter is now available at my site.  ENJOY!!
 
 
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Current Mood: creativecreative
Current Music: Wheel in the Sky - Journey
 
 
15 August 2006 @ 03:46 pm
OK so I get a review like this:

yeah, um, not to be rude or anything, but you might want to do a few
more conjunctions. i mean the story's great and all, but i just think
that it's not quite as good when everybody's talking like a computer
rampaging, not trying to be rude.


I am assuming that this person is referring to dialogue amoungst the characters.

Is this an issue? I mean, just about ALL the stories I have read do their character dialogue on seperate lines. doing something like this:

The dog said, "Ruff?" The cat, purring contently replied, "Meow"

Just doesn't look right. I don't know.

This is taken from an upcoming chapter:

“Hey, how was the exam?” Kelly asked, folding her legs in to sit Indian style on her bed.

“It was hard, but I think I did alright,” Baby answered, setting her books down on her desk and taking a seat in her chair.

“Good, glad the year is finally over. Summer is here!” Kelly exclaimed, waving her arms in the air with excitement.

SHould I be putting some of this together like this?

“Hey, how was the exam?” Kelly asked, folding her legs in to sit Indian style on her bed. “It was hard, but I think I did alright,” Baby answered, setting her books down on her desk and taking a seat in her chair. “Good, glad the year is finally over. Summer is here!” Kelly exclaimed, waving her arms in the air with excitement.

This person signed anonymous, so I can't reply to them to ask them to elaborate.

Dialogue is a pain in the butt and I hate to write it because it usually is alot of one liners that I try hard to fill in actions as well.

Argh, I banned anonymous reviews because I want to be able to have people elaborate for me and so I can look at what they write to see their style.
 
 
11 August 2006 @ 01:07 pm
Anyone want to beta the first chapter of my Dirty Dancing story? If I don't hear from you before 5pm eastern and you reply, I will have to send it to you monday since I don't have net access at home.

I am not 100% about this chapter and am hoping for some input. I would really like someone who is familiar with the movie, who is willing to toss ideas around as well as catch any boo boos I might make.

Just reply here with your email address.